When You Walked Into The Room

When You Walked Into The Room

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A bad pick-up line poem.

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“When You Walked

 In the Room”

You made

 All the married men

Look at their shoes

 Tonight when you

Walked into

The room.

 

Otherwise

Their Friday

Night date with

Their wife would

Be suddenly over!

© 2010 Marie Harrison


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They did one those days those boots would walk all over me.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This made me giggle. Very funny! Great work, maybe this could be turned into a story?! Who knows? I am quite curious as to how she looks as well!

-EverEmma

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 19, 2010
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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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