The Wonder Of His Emergence

The Wonder Of His Emergence

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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A birthday poem.

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The Wonder Of His Emergence

That spotted moth on the

Shoulder of your wife beater

Tells me that you’re a

Mysterious Goth and

Rock ‘n roll sloth.

 

Your bell tolls as your

Spirit roams freely through

Out the desert land,

As you spread your

Mysticism to all.

 

You’re an eclectic sort of man,

Who entered this world to use

His ideas not his hands.

 

We’re so fortunate to know you

And to have our spindly

Thoughts reviewed by you.

 

The world would be certainly

Lax in spice, fire and sparkle

Without the emergence of Pax

Onto this cold heartless earth.

Today we thank the universe

For the day of your birth.

 

Happy Birthday Pax!

 

© 2010 Marie Harrison


Author's Note

Marie Harrison
Happy Birthday Pax, to a great man.

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KL
This is a really cool poem, I dig it. Your wordplay in this is very interesting and captures both the eye and mind. The lapse between rhyme and non-rhyme is executed at perfect intervals, maintaining a very smooth flow. Happy birthday Pax, whomever you are.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A ver y nice tribute to one of the worlds most enlightened gentleman

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cool poem. I hope he appreciated it. He probably loves you. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a grand happy birth wish and a great tribute.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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KL
This is a really cool poem, I dig it. Your wordplay in this is very interesting and captures both the eye and mind. The lapse between rhyme and non-rhyme is executed at perfect intervals, maintaining a very smooth flow. Happy birthday Pax, whomever you are.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ok HAPPY B DAY PAX
Thanks for the invitation to this party.

Posted 13 Years Ago


neat prose... Happy Birthday Pax!!! :0

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I don't know this person, but this is a lovely Birthday poem.
Well done! x

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it!! I love the interesting descriptions and the humor too.



Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice poem. inspiration in motion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on August 20, 2010
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Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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