Wings To Fly

A dream poem about finding encouragement through nature's wings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Wings To Fly

My heart awakens my sleepy soul

Skipping down the rolling and

Mounting piedmonts of love,

 

My emotions have no control

As the day grows

bright and the sun rises

 I see an eagle soar spreading

His mighty wings out

 

 

My spirit frolics aimlessly as

I hear the chirping lullaby

Of the mockingbird swirled

With the sweetly cooing doves.

 

My mind unlocks it's padlocked doors

As I twirl about and dance

Around with unabashed joy.

 

 

Seeking deep comtemplation I

Stop to rest in a soft bed

Of green clover to peer at the

Heavenly clouds above.

 

In a serene state of peace

Watching a bluebird chase

Another but suddenly

Changing routes.

 

My curiosity is stirred,

Judging by their fluid and

Merry movements those

Two are in love.

 

In deep appreciation,

At that moment I

Wished that I could be

As brave as them instead

Of being so coy.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[TAO]

I've read from few who have reminded me of a near perfect day. Even with the sense of being...incomplete...or...held back...this piece conveys, it also conveys an idea of the bliss that awaits us all.

[Steve]

So sweet.......you have a way with words.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

You've given new meaning to the phrase "Leap of Faith".

[Tina Kline]

Nature is the best source of most if not all things that are positive and good. This is an outstanding write!

[Charles]

Bravery is in the opening of your soul for a captive audience. Beautiful write.

[Moonflower]

I soar on the wings of your love and appreciation. Beautiful piece.

[Nimbus Thread]

Nature is a true teacher. Its a soaring piece.

[The Analog Kid]

Gotta hang with nature to get back to the basics. Really nice images and very true words at the end.

[Norma M Sutton]

Nice. Birds are inspirational.

[nono]

IMVU? lol. Slow down on the writing your getting up there that's were I wanna be I just wish I didn't have school so I could work on it! Anyway wanna know something funny! I wrote a poem with the same name!! haha! omg! I mean this has happened to us more than once right? Anyway this is very impressive you did a nice job on this it's beautiful! Strong and making it go! FLY GIRL SPREAD YOUR WINGS!!!