Open Up!

A urgent poem of love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Open Up!

Whirlwind love is at your door

Moaning, she’s stirring wanting more

Aching for you to pour, pour and pour

Gooey, sweet like a melting smore

She’s the woman you adore

Another night of Egyptian cotton in store

Howling at the moon is a folklore

But not the swirling doves of the Irish moor

 

 

Reviews

[Abbie]

this kind of reminds me of a carnival i don't know why but its all good :)


100/100

[al25]

Very well written as usual. Really enjoyed this one.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Splendid Picture..!!!! Like the write too..!!!

[Norma M Sutton]

Love this Marie and love the picture.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

Love the flow and the content very nice :)

[KL]

You know what I'm going to say!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That was sweet as chocolate and smooth as silk. Very enjoyable read.

[OT]

this was a nice quirky piece, and perhaps a little suggestive too? haha I really like how you've extended the rhyme sound throughout!! an octave of A almost!! nice!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful flowing poem!

[Alicia Schroeder]

You amaze me with your brilliant quirky peices. Love this!!