Angel With Indigo Eyes

Angel With Indigo Eyes

A Poem by Marie Harrison
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Pure love behind those eyes

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“ Angel With Indigo Eyes”

 

Eyes of pure

Indigo blue

 

They pierce me

Seeing right through

 

One is lazy

One straight

 

But the love behind them

Makes me never late

 

They are fun and flirty

Make me clean when I am dirty

 

There’s an angel soul

That behind them guides

 

When my body is weary

With them I rest and hide

 

She’s my beloved angel bride

Behind those indigo eyes

© 2011 Marie Harrison


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Wonderful! Nice job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


cute and made me smile


100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


So like the sound of this, read aloud 'tis like a song, sweet and loving! Seems to be saying: no matter what, you're the best .. great thought.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very beautiful. Love the descriptions, positive and beautiful. Excellent work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is sappy, cute, and uplifting. I like how simple it is, as well, and the innocence it seems to exude. Just what I'm getting from it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this Marie.


Posted 8 Years Ago


An angel with a lazy eye? Well, I suppose even heaven is cloudy at times. The alternating rhyme scheme was unusual but seemed a bit forced in places. I love the word "indigo" among thousands of others, it's sound is almost exotic.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I love this one.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like it very good. Good Job. I love angels expecially if i was one. that would be great. good poem though.

-SkyeBlanco-

Posted 8 Years Ago


Breathless. The description is vivid to view just the pure indigo eyes. It's a calm, romantic, and as I said, breathless. Wonderful poetry. Not sure what else to say so I'm going to end it with this, pure awesomeness.

-Raych

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Marie Harrison
Marie Harrison

Atlanta, GA



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