Pinata

a stuffed poem of angst

piñata

how I wish you were

a statue of david

piñata that I could

strike over and over

with a baseball bat

 

i’d watch you sway

back and forth

and all around

with your pink guts

of bubble-gum

pieces hanging out

 

what a productive

way to spend

my day

beating the crap

out of you

Reviews

[Rene Velez]

hahahaha awesomeness, this is good...

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ha ha ha..brilliant..made me day

[M Garcia]

Nice. Hehehe.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

You go girl...tell it like it is.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Don't we all have someone we wish was a pinata! Fun read

[Thea]

This is sooo unique...I had a good time reading this! ♥ it, Marie... :)))

[Coyote Poetry]

I wouldn't want to be this pinata. I like the desire of this poem. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

Now that's a really good way to get all that negative emotion out. A truly wonderful poem!

[Kenneth The Poet]

I love this one. Simple, straightforward, like a blunt object upside the head at 75 mph. Nice work.