Sunkissed Bliss

Words from a lover's bed

Sunkissed Bliss

Clover honey  sweetness

Drips from your moist parted lips to mine

Passion sun caresses enflame my heart to Brightly beacon shine in the darkness

Warm hungry hands fasten me

Securely to this eternal dreamstate world

 Spin me gently like strands of dewy silk

In your downy bed

Lower me slowly into my blissful shrouded grave

Love so swift and brazen

Leaves me in a drunken golden haze

Reviews

[Dean]

The element of the grave stands boldly as a challenge to lust, and perhaps even to love, itself. Your poetry is generally inclusive of the underside of attraction, and that gives the reader fresh insight into each piece. I'll be reading more.

[Little Whisper]

How wonderful to be in that "Drunken golden haze" Your poem gave of that feeling .very nicely written. :)

[Alicia Schroeder]

Greatly done again ;)

[~The Emo Vampire Prince..]

Beautiful I love how it was all put together. Great job my friend yet again. :)

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job, well done.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is beautiful. I love the font color you picked for this piece. sun kissed passion and clover honey. Sounds like a grand day to me.

[K.C. Zbryk]

I thoght the descriptions in this were wonderfully used and made this is an astounding poem. Its simple flow and the heartfelt thoughs left the reader amazed at the content. Brilliant work! Definitly one of the best i have read this evening...

[Jibey]

I felt myself enfolded in your words and caressed in my imagination... a delicious feeling

[Coyote Poetry]

No better place to be then the bliss of love. I like the way you expressed the journey into bliss and happiness. I like the closing lines. Nice to be in a drunken golden haze of love. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Rene Velez]

absolutely beautiful wording, engrossing...great one Marie