Dark Pain

 

 

Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words
Falls against my heart.
It wounds me, and darkly my
Blood drips
To the fallen despairing leaves.
In agony I call your name
While nothingness surrounds me.
Now alone, my love falls upon uncaring eyes.
This is because of you

Reviews

[Marie]

Nicely done.

[Abi Smith]

awesome poem.. although the format i felt didn't fit well... mayb if the words were normal sized...
well thats just how i see it... the poem seemed humble and silent... not at all threatening or loud.
the format gave it the latter feel.

i love it... the words were perfect and evoked sorrow within me. :) awesome.

[Daphne]

I absolutely fell in love with this. Keep up the wonderful writing!!

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

---great poem of pain, where your memories are filled in darkness of the one you lost
"Now alone, my love falls upon uncaring eyes."