What You Have Done

 

What have you done to me?

A shadow of darkness as thoughts scream.

Once we enjoyed paradise,

Childlike and glad-hearted,

But your love died.

A painful vision of memory-

Tears follow darkness, follow blood,

Love left to die.

In a storm of sorrow,

I still love you.

Reviews

[Marie]

Great job. Your work is really great.

[Dezaraye]

Love is such a strong emotion. It's hard to stop loving someone and I don't think that we really ever do.

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

---In a storm of sorrow....I still love you