No Other except You

I was  at the "No"
I negated "You"
I became a tyrant
A fission ripped me apart
I negated "Me"
I denied my negation
Thus "You" became a consent
Now I am in parts
Standing at "exclusion"
Building walls against intrusions
I breathe in splinters
Confine my dispersions

Author's Note

Few words from my heart for the One who is the Only One in every paradigm of perception..

Reviews

[Maan]

These words do seems coming out from your heart, very nicely expressed. Good use of rhymes, the words you have expressed are very strong and they have created a brilliant set up of thoughts for me to think about. It is always good to read something in which writer/poet doesn't apply some extra effort in expressing his/her thoughts and keep the poem very simple and the way that is coming from inside. Very nice poem, keep writing. :)

[WILDERNESS]

it feels like I m reading Rumi. You r so lucky.....have u tasted the wine of His love?

[kmartell]

t aquinas said that (in some essay I half-read) that the who world is but one intelligence. It seems true in this poems sense, thanks. kmartell

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

I love this poem and so does my friend!!!!!!!!!!! This is an amazing piece!!!! I love the way you worded this, the complexity of these few words says so very much!!!! Amazing!!