Battle Cry

Let them know your name as they did mine.

i made a promise not to go gentle.
i made a promise not to go quiet.
so if i have to die screaming a battle cry,
let your name be the last word on my lips.

Reviews

[Victoriana]

ahh..pain caused by love. short, yet very real work, liked it :)

[iamshadowine]

OH wow! This is some amazing poem I'm reading today!
"so if i have to die screaming a battle cry,"

This line is so good! I love it!!
keep writing :D

[Chrys Marie]

Thank you so much!