Write To Me, My Darling

Write To Me, My Darling

A Poem by SimpleMind







Go now, my dear

Spread your wings and fly
Open your eyes and run
Hold your breath and dive so deep

Go to the world

Feel the life of every soul
Win a battle and feel the joy
Make every minute a memory to recall

But darling, do write to me

Write to me your happiness
Write to me your sadness
Write to me about your fears
Write anything, even nonsense things

I will give you your freedom

Go, take her hand and conquer the world
Show her the things you promised to me
Hold her hand, tighter than you held mine

But do write to me my darling

For I love you truly and will always be






~




Simp









© 2014 SimpleMind


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A very beautiful poem.
"But do write to me my darling
For I love you truly and will always be"
I miss the days of letters. You can hold them and keep them forever. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 9 Years Ago


SimpleMind

9 Years Ago

My pleasure Coy.. and thanks for dropping by :)
Touches deeply..her heart breaking wishing him the best of the world..haunting as she calls "write to me"
that is what love does.. Brave face..silent tears.. Great Piece of writing !

Posted 9 Years Ago


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SimpleMind

9 Years Ago

thanks Renee... :) I completely agree
Renée

9 Years Ago

my pleasure ( :
This has a very unique voice that captured me immediately. I really like the rhythm in the lines and how they paint vividly what is going on. I absolutely love the way that this story has a different approach than most would take in that situation, and the fact that it isn't until later that we realize exactly what she is expressing makes it even more powerful. Very well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


SimpleMind

9 Years Ago

Thanks Zach :)
:^:)
beautiful work. so relatable.
im gonna cry now.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SimpleMind

10 Years Ago

Aw~
I never intend to make people cry.. ya know :)

But giving way for other peo.. read more
What a heart-wrenching situation this can be...I've been in this situation but admittedly, I've never been as much of a good sport as the voice of this piece. You have laid out the painful realities of this scenario with a gentle yet almost devastating beauty...great piece :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


SimpleMind

10 Years Ago

Thanks Khan... brave yet very painful. Such bravery is a beauty, isn't it? :)
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

Sure is :)
This poem is heartbreakingly wonderful. I love the repetition of the line 'Write to me my darling'. It's sad how the girl sacrificed her own love for the boy's. The element of writing and that of love put together can do wonders, as it has done over here. Beautiful write. Shelving it. Xx.

Posted 10 Years Ago


SimpleMind

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Rhea! Painful and sad. I wrote this but I know the feeling is mutual to a lot of people.. read more
Aehr

10 Years Ago

I'm sure it is. :(
What a great sacrifice!
What is the pure love!
I appreciate the girl who sacrificed her claim breaking her own heart.
I also apprehend that the same fate waits the girl who has been charmed by the fake promises of the boy.
This is a lovely piece.
I congratulate you dear poet!

Posted 10 Years Ago


SimpleMind

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Zai... It's painful, yes,... expressing feelings through words surely helps a lot... read more
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are always welcome.
Yes,you have done a great job.
Your write may be a consolation o.. read more
Write to me your happiness
Write to me your sadness
Write to me about your fears
Write anything, even nonsense things

I will give you your freedom"

Simply beautifully said but sad nice work.



Posted 10 Years Ago


SimpleMind

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, and yes.. sometimes things are way too sad :(
"Write to me your happiness
Write to me your sadness
Write to me about your fears
Write anything, even nonsense things

I will give you your freedom"

A beautiful poem in its happiness and sadness...:)......................


Posted 10 Years Ago


SimpleMind

10 Years Ago

Yes,.. a beautiful sadness :(
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................

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Added on March 14, 2014
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