STOLEN

You took 
You stole
You quashed 
You squeezed
You ripped  my heart into
many pieces.
You took what didn't belong to you.?
I lie here terrorized
You stole my soul
How can I ever be whole.. 


 

 

Reviews

[ROSALIND]

Interesting, yes I always try to express myself in my poetry thank-you that comment ment a lot cheers for that ...

[iliOZ]

dear rosalind.
yes, they are powerful words.
yours, your feelings at the time you wrote them...
but...
while i read and murmured them, stopped for a millionth of a second on two places and came up with these added thoughts to Dr. Wood:
"you ripped my heart to pieces"
"i can never be whole"

[Dr. Wood ?]

I might leave out the line you took and took and took....But this is pretty powerful stuff