Let me take your portrait

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A Poem by Christine

Something that came to mind...I need a little help with this one. Suggestions are most welcomed and solicited. LOL :-)

Let me paint your picture,
With the lens of my camera.
Let me stop time,
Even if only for a moment,
Capturing your beauty with my shutter.
Let me see your soul
Through this view finder of mine.
Let me caress your body with my eyes.
Let me see you…
The real you;
Not the image you project.
You…
vulnerable
naked
unmasked,
Show me who you are.
Let me take your portrait.

© 2009 Christine

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Author's Note

Thank you JS, for your help. I took you suggestions. :-)

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JadedSparrow

I like what you did with it... The desire driving this piece is enough to make me want to read it again and again. As far as cliches go...well, life is full of cliches, not to mention poetry. I dont think that any of the phrases you've used take away from the poem, but thats just me. Saying all that to say this, I loved it. And you are most welcome : )

JS