Lost Years

Lost Years

A Poem by likesgreeneggsandham

Push me back through time and space

Into that weak and frail body

Concaved cavern of sixteen secrets

So well-kept not even I can remember them

Grant me my memories of forgetting

The forced back flashes of falling into

Bedroom-eyes for strangers

Dismantling what’s left of discernment

The bartender gives you four straw rums

And a license to be salacious

Drag me down murky memory’s lane

Back to climbing into coercion

With too many older men

Give me my recollections of waking

On a cold concrete floor

Completely unsure

Of what had passed before

Hide no longer your reminisces from me

For this curvy creature is ready to face them all  

 


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The Awakening...I love this subject manner. There is that point where a woman becomes her full force and not for others for herself. I think it’s the best time in their life from that point forward. You can’t get their with experience. I wrote about this very thing in a piece called Passau. I really loved this.

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Well thete comes a time and a place where we need to face the music- good thingbto do if it keeps the true you hidden- not always easy to do but will set u free- we live we learn- but must never return to that which wasnt good for us- sometimes easier said than done- amazing act of strength shown in facing ur inner demons and moving on- only makes one stronger- well written 🌹

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likesgreeneggsandham

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Thank you for your thoughtful review. Facing the demons that lurk within us and perhaps keep us repe.. read more
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2 Months Ago

U doing fine and all shall be well those who seek shall find...🌹
This got dark in a hurry. Well written and you can tell the memories and actions that took away the years without much detail. Thank you for sharing!

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likesgreeneggsandham

2 Months Ago

These indeed were dark years. Thanks for taking the time to read and review :o)
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Gee
Light bulb moments, we have a few going through life, where we realise our true worth, learn to love ourselves warts and all, and put an end to trying to fit in with the world by being what they think we should be instead of what we are....if that makes sense.
Good morning

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likesgreeneggsandham

2 Months Ago

Absolute sense Gee, i realized these years were holding me back from releasing a lot of the past. Th.. read more
Gee

2 Months Ago

You are most welcome :)
Four shots of rum lol Yeah that’s youth for you. Enjoy it while it lasts

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Tate Morgan

2 Months Ago

Right now I’m watching Rome
likesgreeneggsandham

2 Months Ago

Rome is excellent and is as good now as when it was released. I would most definitely like to be fri.. read more
Tate Morgan

2 Months Ago

Thank you. I’m honored
The Awakening...I love this subject manner. There is that point where a woman becomes her full force and not for others for herself. I think it’s the best time in their life from that point forward. You can’t get their with experience. I wrote about this very thing in a piece called Passau. I really loved this.

Posted 2 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

likesgreeneggsandham

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the thoughtful read and gracious review. My awakening process like many gone before me.. read more
Interesting...admitting your to your wild child that now you've grown and still carry those 'demons'. Great write!

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likesgreeneggsandham

2 Months Ago

I'm so very aware of how those demons played out their games in my life. I hope to release them furt.. read more
Sounds like you had a wild youth. Great write!

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likesgreeneggsandham

2 Months Ago

absolute nihilistic living. Thanks for the kind review!
I really like this write, found it intriguing

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likesgreeneggsandham

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much for your read and review. Writing about this era of my life intrigues me as well as I.. read more
So many WORK HARD at forgetting for their whole lives and you have the courage to reach into your memories to draw them closer...

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likesgreeneggsandham

2 Months Ago

With some encouragement I was inspired to dig a little deeper. I hope by drawing them closer they wi.. read more

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Durban, KwaZulu-Natal , South Africa



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Fledgling poet on a mystical journey. My poems touch on themes of sex, madness, addiction, loneliness, pain, you name it. I also write about my pilgrimage towards finding the Self. more..

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