Cold Walls

Cold Walls

A Poem by clairvoyantmars

She cries the loneliness away

And shouts accusations in her head

They echo back into her shadows

And pulse throughout her empty shell

Their voices sound inside her mind

Her quiet pleas are left unheard

T’was such her lonely world

She walks with placid routine

No aimless step wasted

Such beauty, they say, such power

But they hear not the cries in her head

The heavy cloud she carries

The secrets no one knows

All they see is her carefree smile

I’m haunted, she whispers to herself

She returns to her place of solace

Back to the walls who have seen her tears

No warmth in their touch

No words of comfort for the sobs they hear

Such pitiful routine

Such sad regress

Just sleep my darling

And don’t touch the walls

The chills in their touch will creep in your dreams

Just sleep….

© 2011 clairvoyantmars


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exquisitely beautiful!
love this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so chillingly beautiful. I felt her pain and sadness in each word.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"don't touch the walls" loving it. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


beautiful and disturbing at the same time, it's very well made and i enjoyed it :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is an extremely powerful and profound write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


So beautiful!! I love this SO much!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A masterful and flowed worded piece, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


good


Posted 12 Years Ago


So disturbingly beautiful. Excellent job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


"The chills in their touch will creep in your dreams"
Just sleep...

I absolutely love this and this line nails it.. locked inside the four walls of life and self is the feeling I got from this.. and excellent write..xx

Posted 12 Years Ago



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clairvoyantmars
clairvoyantmars

Philippines



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I've been seriously starting to write my own novels since 2008. So far, I've finished three novels and have a lot of unfinished ones piled up. I also write short stories and poems and the occasional s.. more..

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