torn

the wilted love
my withered heart
the rasping voice
my haunted scream

Reviews

[stars are far]

yeah we all pass through that one day or another, but we have to remember that every torn piece will be fine one day, just like ripped jeans :P they are now a trend, but one day they were for poor people, (though i dont like them :P) .. your writing was very expressive, well done

[Clarissssaaaa]

Thanks for reviewing

[blaqpearl]

short but very expressive... deep stuff...