Brick by Brick

Brick by Brick

A Poem by Dylan C.
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Another poem in the Villanelle style

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I lay it all down, brick by brick
As I struggle to build this wall
I can't do it alone, I need your love to make them stick

It's something can't do too quick
It takes time to build that which can bear it all
I lay it all down, brick by brick

Don't worry, this is no trick
You'll be safe with me, please don't stall
I can't do it alone, I need your love to make them stick

Without us both it will surely crumble with one good kick
And to someone new my bricks I'll have to haul
I lay it all down, brick by brick

Trust me, there's no need to panic
Don't be afraid, I'll catch you if you fall
I can't do it alone, I need your love to make them stick

The higher it grows, the more I feel optimistic
But will our wall last? It's too soon to call
I lay it all down, brick by brick
I can't do it alone, I need your love to make them stick

© 2010 Dylan C.


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Wow true that :) patience and love is whats needed.. i like this alot going on my favorites XD 100/100

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Dylan C.
Dylan C.

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I never know what to write in these things, my name is Dylan, I'm a student at Central Michigan University and....that's all I have. If you want to know something, just ask. more..

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A Poem by Dylan C.