Daydream

Daydream, what a stupid word

More like telling lies is what i heard

They way you want it to be 

For better or for worse is what all i can see

I wear gowns, I drink tea

Am I a princess? Am I a queen?

And just like that, in a snap

I am back to reality

Do you see what I see?

Did you hear what i heard?

Do you understand what i mean? 

I am a peasant wearing rags 

I had my chance to be a princess or a queen

But not anymore,

Because I'm out of daydream

 

Reviews

[C Peril]

I like the way you have erected a barrier between dreams and reality in this particular poem and the manner in which you explore how dreams impact on our waking lives, often making them seem more drab and grey - at least that's what I got from the tone of the poem. Good work. Keep it up!

[Lilah Cleare]

I apologize for seeing this so late but thanks so much for the amazing feedback. I appreciate it greatly.

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Daydream and reality are absolutely different, as you showed it. Nice writing!!!!

[Matthew Kult]

Harshly real

Great Read

Matthew