The Colour of Pain

The Colour of Pain

A Poem by RannunculusBlooms
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From a prompt asking me to describe the "colour of pain"

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Explosions of red,
Undefinable feelings,
Muddled, blurry thoughts.

© 2017 RannunculusBlooms


Author's Note

RannunculusBlooms
I thought the idea was super cool. I just hope I was able to properly convey it.

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Red is the color of passion. I understood clearly. Well done.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m2P5q7iR27Q

Posted 6 Years Ago


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RannunculusBlooms

6 Years Ago

thank you! im glad you liked it
Very well captured the colour of pain...So true.

Posted 6 Years Ago


RannunculusBlooms

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on May 26, 2017
Last Updated on May 26, 2017
Tags: poem, poetry, haiku

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Hi I'm Cleo! I'm 20 years old, I like good podcasts and bad music. I'm a amateur's poet and although I'm not great at poetry yet, practice makes perfect! Any feedback/criticism is incredibly helpful!!.. more..

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