true love

my presction of love

TRUE LOVE

the longing for true friend

that cares for you till the end

the feeling of

a lonely heart

until a girl is found

and till death do they part

when that girl is finally found

he will lift her of the ground

a special time between to lovers

to share the years of fun to come

 

 

Reviews

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

aren't we all wanting to find the perfect lover????wouldn't that be almost unreal????

this was short and sooo sweet!!! i'm 13 and i think that this is really good.. people on here think that you're stuff won't be as good cause you're age, and i know how that feels, but i think you just proved all those people wrong...nice job!!!

~may

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Awesome job!

True love is everyone's desire, I'm sure. ;) This was a cute lil poem. ^^

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[SamBug]

This was amazing. Again, you're writing seems to always amaze me.

[D. Nelson]

if only that were how it worked... =... good write though. it opens up memories, any piece that can do that is worth it in my book, kudos.

[Tony Hwilka]

Short and sweet, keep writing you are on you way.

Tony

[Fran Marie]

It would be great to have that one true love to be sure

~very nicely expressed and well penned

Fran Marie

[lauren emily]

This is a very nice poem, great job!
Keep up the good work!
Lauren

[W.Piggy]

Heya!
This poem is so sweet. :D Realy nice! Great Job. :)
I can't believe you can write so good and your only 12. You have such a great future, you're so good!
:)
I'm 13 and already your so much better than me, you sound like a pro. :)
And age doesn't matter, many older people can't even write as good as you.
Great Job.
Talk to you later.
:)
W.Piggy

[ABBY]

i never got to finish this one

[Celtic Cat]

aww, sweet. A model version of true love! I like your perspective on this, very upbeat and honorable! Good job! And to respond to May's review below.....some of us already have!! ; )