After the Rain

After the Rain

A Poem by Chris
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"Thoughts and daze, days of thoughts..."

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After the Rain (5/21/17)


Thoughts and daze,

Days of thoughts,

Dazed in thoughts,

Caught up in thoughts,

Thoughts in bland pots,

Pots of grey,

The night away,

Hickory dickory dock,

The cat ran into the clock,

The clock was running amok,

It's time faded,

Confiscated,

The cat's nine lives ran out

After an angry bout

with the Grandfather clock,

Screaming out insane,

Bullet through the brain,

After the rain,

Grey was red.


© 2017 Chris



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The title of your poem provoked me to read it and it was simply amazing. I liked the use of hickory dickory dock, pure nostalgia.

Regards,
Anjali

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

6 Months Ago

I like how I used that element as well, it helped me branch out on a beautiful train of thought. Tha.. read more
Anjali

6 Months Ago

You are welcome, Chris!
Wow. There's suspense, foreshadowing, passion, violence...incredible and dark.
Love it!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

6 Months Ago

The dark is one of my favourite feelings to write about because it is such good fuel for beautiful w.. read more
Very nice us of thoughts. I liked the use of the nursery rhyme in the poetry. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you Chris. I enjoyed your work today.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris

6 Months Ago

Thank you, I am flattered. The nursery rhyme was my touch to give it a little flare.
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

You did well and you are welcome.

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