Wish you knew.

Wish you knew.

A Poem by Wolfe

With the 57 cents of change plummeting to the ground

My heart never pounded so intensely 

Time was no longer 

Seconds got longer

Tunnel vision towards her

I try and gasp for air

but my mouth does not open 

I could not breathe

What is this feeling

this tingling sensation through my chest

I’ve never felt it before, I felt whole again

Then she says “ that will be ($)32.64”

I pick up the change and pay

I walk away only saying “Thanks, have a nice day."

© 2017 Wolfe

Author's Note

LOL, it might be cheesy, just tell me if it is.

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Not cheesy at all. Feels sweet and authentic. Think most of us have felt this way a time or two. You managed to paint picture in all the flavors of your thoughts and emotions which made it inviting and rivoting. I enjoyed

Posted 2 Months Ago

omg lol that sounds like a cute first love awwwwwwwwwwww that's so adorable C

Posted 2 Months Ago

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One of many intriguing events in life.......

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Haha, a fun read. Enjoyed it!

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Added on August 2, 2017
Last Updated on August 2, 2017
Tags: Love, opportunity




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