Wish you knew.

Wish you knew.

A Poem by Wolfe

With the 57 cents of change plummeting to the ground

My heart never pounded so intensely 

Time was no longer 

Seconds got longer

Tunnel vision towards her

I try and gasp for air

but my mouth does not open 

I could not breathe

What is this feeling

this tingling sensation through my chest

I’ve never felt it before, I felt whole again

Then she says “ that will be ($)32.64”

I pick up the change and pay

I walk away only saying “Thanks, have a nice day."


© 2017 Wolfe



Author's Note

Wolfe
LOL, it might be cheesy, just tell me if it is.

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Not cheesy at all. Feels sweet and authentic. Think most of us have felt this way a time or two. You managed to paint picture in all the flavors of your thoughts and emotions which made it inviting and rivoting. I enjoyed

Posted 2 Months Ago


omg lol that sounds like a cute first love awwwwwwwwwwww that's so adorable C

Posted 2 Months Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
SSR
One of many intriguing events in life.......

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Zoe
Haha, a fun read. Enjoyed it!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

87 Views
4 Reviews
Rating
Added on August 2, 2017
Last Updated on August 2, 2017
Tags: Love, opportunity

Author

Wolfe
Wolfe

KS



About
"I am like nobody you have ever met before." Is what I would say if I weren't as boring and uncool as that sentence was. I enjoy activities such as: writing (I go through phases), fitness/health, trav.. more..

Writing
Common Common

A Poem by Wolfe


The phoenix The phoenix

A Poem by Wolfe