Need You

Need You

A Poem by Wolfe

Need you  to         answer back

need you to   love me back

need you to    say it back

need you to  not leave me now

need you to not smoke right now

Need you to leave right now


© 2017 Wolfe



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From Your presentation, how You first and last lines appears, I think You are giving one last chance, either to give You a good reason, or leave You at peace... still between those two lines, You hide Your own feelings and speak to Your inner self, I hope if this is a personal experience, that things will be much better.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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From Your presentation, how You first and last lines appears, I think You are giving one last chance, either to give You a good reason, or leave You at peace... still between those two lines, You hide Your own feelings and speak to Your inner self, I hope if this is a personal experience, that things will be much better.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Agree with SSR. Would be more powerful rhyming..

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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The style of presentation and cutting of sentences are good and new, but if there would be rhymes it would bw better wolfe...

Posted 2 Months Ago


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