The phoenix

The phoenix

A Poem by Wolfe

Aimlessly day dreaming please let the Phoenix free

Free from all the attention of image

Free from all the cages and restrictions

That has been placed upon him

Clip these metal bindings and let his feathers flutter

for a while until it starts to become an ease

gliding then soaring through a gentle breeze

cause what he’s seen is far more compared to all the hype of the high seas

not the rain, snow, thunder, or lighting can bring him back down to the ground

the rain keeps pounding down but the Phoenix stays radiant

yeah the Phoenix stays radiant and gracious

and thanks us for all that we have done for what he has become

because without all the adversity, calamity, and actuality

he wouldn’t be an inspiring story to many future prophecies 


© 2017 Wolfe



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Aimlessly day dreaming please let the Phoenix free
Free from all the attention of images
Free from all the restrictions & cages
Clip these metal bindings and let his feathers beat
for a while until it starts to become an ease
gliding then soaring through a gentle breeze
cause what he’s seen is far more compared to all the hype of the high seas
not the rain, snow, thunder, or lighting can bring him back down to the ground
the rain keeps pounding down but the Phoenix stays radiantly crowned
yeah the Phoenix stays radiant and gracious
and thanks us for all that we have done for what he has become
because without all the adversity, calamity, and actuality
he wouldn’t be an inspiring story to many future prophecies

Its small try of correction



Its creative, Imaginative and had a very strong message
to let dreams & desires fly
Atleast let them once try
... Its great keep it up


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Aimlessly day dreaming please let the Phoenix free
Free from all the attention of images
Free from all the restrictions & cages
Clip these metal bindings and let his feathers beat
for a while until it starts to become an ease
gliding then soaring through a gentle breeze
cause what he’s seen is far more compared to all the hype of the high seas
not the rain, snow, thunder, or lighting can bring him back down to the ground
the rain keeps pounding down but the Phoenix stays radiantly crowned
yeah the Phoenix stays radiant and gracious
and thanks us for all that we have done for what he has become
because without all the adversity, calamity, and actuality
he wouldn’t be an inspiring story to many future prophecies

Its small try of correction



Its creative, Imaginative and had a very strong message
to let dreams & desires fly
Atleast let them once try
... Its great keep it up


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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