Crashing

Very short, quick and over

 

Crashing

 

Moonlight shines dully

While waves crash wildly,

Mighty upon the coast

Shall one stand?

 

Loudly they wail

Crying for the lost

Forever gone

‘Neath darkness of foam.

 

Reviews

[The Darkest Silhouette]

this poem came and went as quickly as the tides, which works for it

i commend the shortness of your poem, it takes alot of patience to write something that short, i would be going back and adding more, muddling its original meaning

[Angel Bird]

Only a few words, but a big impact.
Provokes sadness and images ...
Well done!