Perfect

Perfect

A Poem by George Love
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The Perfect Girl

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Perfect
 
Brightly laughing eyes
Always shining
Even through rain.
They were my sun
Hair so black
Shining with light
And skin so soft
I knew you were
Unknowing as I sat
Not too far away
And watched your every move
As you walked about
Speaking so softly and tenderly
Every word a song.
Was it I only who heard?
Heart now smitten
In love now I fall
For you are so perfect
With you fall I will
Never did you know
And never you will
This love held inside
Years all they heal
Yet cut now so deeply
With needles so sharp
Love from inside
Wants only an escape
Never will be ever
This love for you known
To my grave this flame I carry
This flame own you now.
Watching afar,
Our lives how they change
Yet I see you still
Perfect.
 

© 2008 George Love


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As spoken word, this would fabulous! It has such a great flow love :) A really powerful and beautfiully bright poem, such a devotion is never known, so saddening!
xx


Posted 13 Years Ago


a beautiful poem - very nicely done

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

A Beautiful write so well expressed and nicely penned~ Fran

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful and heartbreaking as well. The words you use, weave, into such beauty.
"Never will be everThis love for you known"...........who among us has not had this experience? You speak to everyone here, and so well.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful and good luck on the contest!

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Nicely written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful piece How wonderful to feel love such as this.

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Great imagery, nicely done.


Great Write
Rayne

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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