Always

Always

A Poem by Cocoacandy

I will always love you,
I will always care,
I will always help you,
I will always be there.
I will always come,
I will always watch,
and I will always support you.
I will always comfort,
and I will always encourage.

And why?
Because I will always NEED you.

© 2011 Cocoacandy


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short, sweet and to the point.
Very nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is the kind of poem I like you to write. Gentle and loving. You have a active mind. A beautiful poem of love and appreciation. Thank you. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very sweet poem :) I enjoy this one alot, needed someone entails al that you've listed and so much more. The unspoken part of the poem I enjoyed the most :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's short and sweet, as i'm sure that's what it was going for. the repetition of "you" is infrequent and rhyming of "care" and "there" is distracting, but otherwise, nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cute and sweet :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Cocoacandy
Cocoacandy

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im a fairly random person that tends to confuse people. i try not to, but hey, whatevs... i enjoy writing poetry, and once in a while dabble in short stories, occasionally books... im attemping to wri.. more..

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