colors

colors

A Poem by cody mclaughlin
"

are butiful

"

flowers are pink

trees are green

the best picture ive ever seen

the ocean is blue as well as the sky

and a heart is red so im in love and i could almost die

 

 

 

 


© 2012 cody mclaughlin



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sweet, lovely, amazing, its sounds deffinitely as real poem, I like the mixture between seriousness and playing game in this verses...and love colors!
~nia~

Posted 1 Year Ago


How sweet, young love!

Posted 1 Year Ago


it was forsing me to stay underlined


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is a great poem I like it, but to do emphasis with underline I think you should do it probably on the colors, the Love, and die.

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on April 21, 2012
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14 Bol lol lol, MA



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My name is Cody McLaughlin I am 9 I love to type and write I love video games I love to write about video games more..

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