Where to go from here

Where to go from here

A Poem by Jéssica Fernandes

i don't know where to go from here 
here 
where your words sound like bees
buzzing over honey fields. 
you're so beautifully poetic
with flowers as your friends,
blooming upon sketches of your skin
- probably the sweetest kind of peel,
milky and silky
et enivrant à tous les jours,
i would sometimes say.

and i almost wish to bruise it
so that you would not be able to forget me.
but darling,
love it's such a dangerous way
and i just don't know where to go from you.

© 2013 Jéssica Fernandes


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smart write...i like the first and last lines...the juxtaposition of "here" and "you"

and the here with you that isn't working anymore.

our love is too dangerous..it's like she has gotten sucked in, but now holds her breath so much so that she can't enjoy the love...something won't quite let her freeflow...so she has to go...

love this poem..

you are very natural in your phrasing...and different..

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jéssica Fernandes

11 Years Ago

oh, thank you for stopping by and for the amazing review. i loved how you explored the core of this .. read more


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Eu não gosto de poemas. Simplesmente não consigo envolver a cabeça à volta deles. Mas tenho que te dizer, este agarrou-me de uma maneira que não esperava. Adorei. Tens muito talento. Não o desperdices.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jéssica Fernandes

10 Years Ago

também prefiro a prosa e não estou tão segura quando mergulho em tentativas de poesia, por isso o.. read more
Such love. If only there were many people like that.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I agree with jacob. I like what I see here. Do you have other poems? Let me know, if you would. I would be very interested in reading them. Thanks, Jéssica.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jéssica Fernandes

11 Years Ago

i don't usually write in english, so i don't really have much more for you to read. i will be adding.. read more
Verser

11 Years Ago

I will look forward to your postings.
ooooh I love this !!! YOU my dear, are so beautifully poetic !! I can never get too excited when I read alliteration, it flows just beautifully. And being half french, I love that french phrase ! This is def going in favorites, you have talent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jéssica Fernandes

11 Years Ago

thank you very much, lovely, oh, i'm learning french (my mum is french) and i'm finding the language.. read more
This was quite...real in the emotional draw. The words, timing and flow - were right.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jéssica Fernandes

11 Years Ago

oh, thank you :)
Chris

11 Years Ago

I wasn't teasing... and welcome
smart write...i like the first and last lines...the juxtaposition of "here" and "you"

and the here with you that isn't working anymore.

our love is too dangerous..it's like she has gotten sucked in, but now holds her breath so much so that she can't enjoy the love...something won't quite let her freeflow...so she has to go...

love this poem..

you are very natural in your phrasing...and different..

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jéssica Fernandes

11 Years Ago

oh, thank you for stopping by and for the amazing review. i loved how you explored the core of this .. read more
This is a wonderful write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Jéssica Fernandes

11 Years Ago

thank you!!

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Added on March 27, 2013
Last Updated on March 29, 2013
Tags: poetry, poem, love

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Jéssica Fernandes
Jéssica Fernandes

Viana do Castelo, Portugal



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