Critique

Every artist no matter how big or small,
No matter which art,this goes for them all.
What they should respect and cherish the most,
Is opinions of their work that others host

Critique is the name of that veiled maiden.
Who politely stays next to front gates with her strong posture.
Until we invite in our minds garden,
That lady of high stature.

She might be cynical,pretentious,
She makes us anxious.
The reason we stand her,
Is because of our work she's insightful

She's the one pointing out faults in our creations,
She notices every defect on children of our imagination.
And to help treat them we must embrace her,
So remedy for sickness she can stir.

Author's Note

Comment n stuff like that.

Reviews

[justdandy]

Some people are afraid of this little critique that is inside of their brain, soul. And it some way, I guess it is okay to fear. But some other way it isn't. Our inner critique is what helps us become writers, poets, musicians, artists, authors, painters. To fear, gives us the reason to not write something that might be extraordinary. This poem is exactly what every person needs to hear. I really, really liked it.

[Cody Jeremy Thompson]

Yeah I thought of this as a bit of a recom tip for new writers, take notes from critiques.

[Cody Jeremy Thompson]

Tip* screw autocorect and lack of sleep.

[justdandy]

hahaha lol

[Kader Bouitan]

Toching ... loved it really keep up the good work thanks

[Cody Jeremy Thompson]

Thanks for your kind words.