logic, crazy fools

substantiality weighs heavily upon the soul and worried mind,
as we gather in the corners, dripping ugliness and secrecy.
holding on to our pathetic affirmations that,
"pain is weakness leaving the body."
begging to forget how the words they spoke came out cracked,
uttered with love and terror at our perished minds.
"you are sick," they bellow.
"you are broken," they wail.
"but we are so close to beautiful," we cry.
just ask, how can one measure beauty, in full intensity and meaning?
we will tell you all, "you see, with pounds, of course."
are they mad in not seeing that simple logic?
it is all so perfect and absolute -
so insane and wrong.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Joy]

So this somehow reminded me of this terrible gym teacher I had in school...lol. Loved it, great expression of the media's twisted view on beauty. Keep writing! :)

[Andrew'sWonderland]

A very interesting read with many truths and hidden, deeper meanings!! Beautifully crafted and well put!!

[Obsidian Blackbird McNi..]

this is very deep. but with a little electro snuck in there. cheers

[Orlando Murcia]

Yes logic smogic
Who care about logic
most of it is crock anyways

Loved this!!

Great work

Orlando M