Meow Kitty Why

Meow Kitty Why

A Poem by Coltron
"

Second piece involving cats? Coincidence, I swear.

"

Meow, meow
Kitty, what's new?
Master's got a gun
And he's pointing it at you.

Oh, no
Kitty,what'd you do?
Seems you've peed on the couch again;
How could you?

You say
Timmy hasn't cleaned
The catbox in a week, oh
Well, now
Kitty, what else is new?
You should really see the state
Of Timmy's own bathroom


Tim's father said
If kitty
Pisses on the couch again
He's gonna shoot her
In the head.

How could Timmy have known
That it wasn't a joke when he said
Shoot my cat and I'll pee on your bed?

That didn't go so well.


Run, run
Kitty, he's coming
Daddy's got a .22 caliber gun

Tim can
Rifle through the closet
All day long for hiding spots
But
You won't hide
From the rifle.


I guess Kitty
Should have thought of that
Before a cat became a pet
Now Timmy's got a mess to clean
And a bed to pee on.


© 2010 Coltron



Author's Note

Coltron
Soon to be put to music. I'm not very good at organizing that verse/chorus/verse crap, so criticism there is welcome as is criticism of any sort.

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Oh, poor Kitty. While disturbing to think that someone would shoot a cat, I found this poem entertaining. You did a great job telling the story and setting the tone via a poem. I thought it flowed well, and I was amused even though it was a disturbing tale. Thank you for sharing your writing on the Cafe, and I hope to read more in the future.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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i love cats, kittys, felines of all kinds! (hence my picture)
really funny! :D
hey isn't it funny that my pic is a cat and your poem is about a cat?

Posted 4 Years Ago


the poem is great but for me the ending leaved me hanging
but the transition is so effective
this poem is closely related to my poem "krizzie love" ..
=]

Posted 5 Years Ago


That was so entertaining and catchy! well done!! that was a great piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


These lyrics are pretty wonderful
They are playful, with this serious undertone of sadness.


Posted 7 Years Ago


it's hillarible.

hm, interesting narration.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, lol...funny and wicked!
Great Write,
elyssa

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Though sad for the kitty, this was a delightful read! You did an awesome job! I wouldn't change a thing...It has PLENTY of emotion without giving the cat more voice!

~excellent~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

pOoR kitty!!! i am a cat lover so this was a little scary for me. i like what your trying to do here your feeling is there and so is the intensity just a little more organization. maybe more from the cat's point of view would give it a lil more emotion.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Colton,
Excellent job of illustrating the conflict between you, J.P. and Dad. Deeply sad that his words are so cruel.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh, poor Kitty. While disturbing to think that someone would shoot a cat, I found this poem entertaining. You did a great job telling the story and setting the tone via a poem. I thought it flowed well, and I was amused even though it was a disturbing tale. Thank you for sharing your writing on the Cafe, and I hope to read more in the future.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 11, 2008
Last Updated on February 12, 2010
Tags: cats, lyrics, bad kitty

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Coltron
Coltron

Colorado Springs, CO



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