Evidence

Evidence

A Poem by Constance-Outspoken

Greater evidences of heart
never pass from one's lips
as humble utterances
for touch is truer speech

Within hand's tremble
or the lilting vibration
of timid breath upon flesh
all is finally laid bare

 I aspire to feel this truth
once within your embrace
for the eyes may deceive
as ears can't be believed



© 2011 Constance-Outspoken



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Greater evidences of heart
never pass from one's lips
as humble utterances
for touch is truer speech

That was a beautiful first stanza. Though the whole poem was great. Well done Constance:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


I thought this was absolutely moving and powerful

Such an amazing piece

I honestly do not know how to describe this piece


All I know is that your hand had a powerful force behind it

that echoed through my spirit..


Well done Constance !!!

Loved it..


Orlando

Posted 6 Years Ago


you packed a lot of punch in the short lines which was great to see
beautifully written

Posted 6 Years Ago


Excellent wording in this poem! Love the tone to it!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Enjoyed your ruminations on the authenticity of touch.

"the lilting vibration
of timid breath upon flesh"

was a gorgeous turn of phrase.

Delightful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Talk is cheap if actions don't back it up. A beautifully melancholy piece of writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


The tone sounds familiar. What have you been reading lately? Shakespeare or Keats? I like it!! It's like a refashioning of sorts. This would be beautifully done as a spoken piece as well. As always, my talented acquaintance, keep sharing!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Constance-Outspoken
Constance-Outspoken

Who wants to know where I am, when who I am is all that matters?, KS



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