My Battle.

My Battle.

A Poem by The Invisible Girl

I'm back

can't you feel it?

I'm in the air

 waiting, watching, preparing for..

 ..the solution for my pain

I got rid of it once

but it keeps coming back

haunting me

he asking me for more..

 ..pain

I enjoy it

I feed on it

I prey on her

can't you see that she's weak

ready to fall

only thing I have to say is..

 ..shut up

shut up

I don't want to hear your lies

I don't need these lies

 

you're ugly

I'm beautiful

 

you're nothing

I have worth

 

unloved

I am loved by God 


nobody cares for you

I have family and friends

 

it can all go away with just a single cut

you must go away

 

My name is insecurity

 

insecurity. you mean nothing to me

because I  lived it, I fought it, and in the end

I will defeat it  as many times as I have too.

© 2012 The Invisible Girl


Author's Note

The Invisible Girl
Black: insecurity
Pink: Is me.
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Wow...one word I can say to descirbe this. Powerful. This poem is full of strength and pure right. I can completely relate to this. Insecurity is a powerful thing, and so is will power. We're able to fight back this thing, "Insecurity", we will fight back every. single. time. But it all depends on us, and I believe every one of us is strong enough to fight back. Everyone of us is strong, beautiful, and loved.
Great poem. Love it

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks!!! :D Glad you liked it!
This. Is. Me. This is an amazing poem and I really like how you made it a conversation with insecurity.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks!!!! :D
Very nice poem!
I really liked this and how well you are defying insecurity :)
Keep it up,
-Penelope H.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :D
Euro

11 Years Ago

You're welcome :)
Your words ring true. I enjoy how you formatted the poem, it shows the conflicting forces of your own inner emotions. It is truly beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Glad you liked it!! ^-^
I think this was a very powerful poem and quite possibly my favorite thing I've ever read by you. The contrasting colors and voices and how you make your voice ten times more impactful than insecurity makes it all the worth while. I loved this!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Really?! Awesome! Glad you liked it!! :D
I love the way you formatted this whole thing, it really makes it even more enjoyable to read. This is indeed a great pooem, and something many people face. It is never easy defeating our own insecurities, well put!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks for reading! :)
I'm jealous, haha. I'm jealous of the way you have this certain drive that keeps you from falling back into the arms of self mutilation. You seem like such an incredibly strong person! And if you keep this attitude, and don't believe the lies of that inner voice, I know you can completely beat the insecurities.



Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Glad you like it! Thanks for the review. :)
Wow... I loved it. Nice style of writing :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
Nice. It really gets the struggle perfectly (I feel like your taking lessons from someone :) I've never seen you write so well before

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Actually I'm not taking lesson from anyone. :) I'm just writing what I feel. Thanks for reading! :D
This is so great! You really captured the internal struggle perfectly!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks! :)

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Added on December 30, 2012
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Tags: war with self, insecure, feelings, doubts

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