Masquerade

Masquerade

A Story by The Invisible Girl

People hiding behind

decorated masks.

Can't tell anyone apart

It was like I was in another world

I sat alone and soon decided to leave

As I was leaving,

I felt eyes on me

I twirled around to see a mysterious guy

watching me.

Without any difficulty he pushed through the crowd to me

He asked me to dance

Who was this mysterious guy?

"Who are you?" I whispered as we danced.

It was like I was hypnotized just being near him

 I couldn't even breathe

He didn't answer only his beautiful eyes smiled down at me.

I felt drawn to them and I knew that

after that night my heart will never be the same.

I wanted to see what was behind the mask

I just wanted to see his face.

"What's your name?"

Again he didn't replied

he continued to dance with me.

My dress twirling around me.

and his protective hands around my waist

Soon the music began to end

It had to be magic because

I didn't seem to notice anyone else in the room

It was like it was meant to be

He saved me from sitting alone

just by saying five words

"Will you dance with me?"

With the last note of the song

He drew me close...

"Do I know you?"

He's lips were close to mine

Soon they were on mine

What seemed to be forever, he pulled away

and with a loud and clear voice

he said, "Welcome to my masquerade."

© 2013 The Invisible Girl


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YAY! I loved this. It was so much fun to read. The pacing of it made me want to read faster and faster to find out more.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mysterious...love the last line. Looking forward to reading much more of your work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

Thanks!!! I look at your work in return! :)
Mysterious and alluring, the perfect guy! It's a really good write.
Love,
CreativeCookie

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was really great!! I really love the last line,
''Welcome to the masquerade.''

Posted 11 Years Ago


>.< DUDE WHAT IS HIS NAME!!
Very mysterious, and wonderfully written. I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

LOL!!! Thanks!! I just reviewed your new poem! ;)
The Fallen

11 Years Ago

I saww :P
Your welcome!
The Invisible Girl

11 Years Ago

XD lol Thanks!!!

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