Wild

I can't believe
That I could be this wild
Sneaking out
Partying late
because you make me feel alive

On our first date
We took my dad new car for a drive
Not sure if we were speeding
The signs were all a blur

You make me laugh
You make me smile
Lets turn the music up a little bit higher
The clock ticks 12
Better go
Don't want to miss another free show

You spin me around
I know that I am safe and sound
You would never let anything hurt me
Walking hand and hand
You tell me that you love me
And that's all I need to hear

We are wild
It doesn't matter
We just want have fun
Disturbing the peace
Talking all afternoon
You are the one that makes me feel alive.

Reviews

[Mike Cole]

I also agree that this was a good ride and that you really have a talent for letting the reader get lost in what you are writing. Great poem Keep writing!

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :)

[DogDrawler]

A wonderful ride, I'll say. Not many poems could top this. :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks! :)

[DogDrawler]

Sorry to decline your friend request. We just didn't have anything in common. I hope you can forgive me. :)

[The Invisible Girl]

It's okay.

[Criss ;)]

Beautiful song written by you. Liked this song, you've shown me a real frnds life's living style. I'd made my views and i was enjoying reading this nice song. keep writing. 100/100 :)

[The Invisible Girl]

Thanks!!! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! :)