Peace

This poem was written on my journey in Pakistan. At the time there were many conflicts going on there and some affected me deeply which inspired me to write this poem.

One thing this world never knew

What could it be? And i say it's peace

Wars are all that we know in truth

Wars are fought always in the name of peace

                  

A moral said by a great man

United we stand, divided we fall

But we witness it the other way

Divided we stand, united we fall

We could have solved problems through 

peace

But what to do they never got solved

Countries held talks known as 'peace talks'

But what was the result, we never got peace

                           

Everything could have been solved by peace

This world would have been a better place

But Countries will always struggle 

As greed and war takes them over.

Reviews

[DJ]

When will people learn? Loved this piece, great flow, awesome message and powerful words. Well penned, thanks, Cairo.

[Abbas]

Thank you for the review Cairo!!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Ah yes, my sentiments too. When will they ever lean! Nice thoughtful poem

[Abbas]

Yes though they get hurt they never learn i guess it's part of being human? and thanks for the review!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write on the subject of peace. Bravo

[Abbas]

thanks! Comments are appreciated!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Laminators Dubai]

you think anyone gonna understand, they just want to fight, no, they dont want fight, the just want to start it, they just want to see fights and enjoy it.

thanks for sharing this war-fully peaceful rhyme...

[Abbas]

hey glitch, first of all thanks for reviewing :) and i would like to say that there are people who would like peace but what are they doing about it? nothing the people who actually worked for it. Like Mahatma Ghandi, Martin Luther King were killed by others..

[Laminators Dubai]

at least they try...
death is not the end of thoughts...

[Abbas]

true.. you are one awesome optimist

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks!
i have to be one...
my mum and bro are awesome...
dad is funny!
catch me on fb if you want to its glitch vow

[Laminators Dubai]

thanks!
i have to be one...
my mum and bro are awesome...
dad is funny!
catch me on fb if you want to its glitch vow

[Abbas]

yup added you new account?

[Laminators Dubai]

i dont get it

[Abbas]

have you created a new account?

[Abbas]

on facebook

[Laminators Dubai]

yeah.
send me a message