Sea of whiskey

This is about a man trying to drink his life away.

Drown me in a sea of whiskey, don’t let me breathe

 I don’t want to see the light, you can’t change my mind

Whiskey is my only friend the only option

 to see me through this pain called life

 I hope and pray for the day to come when my body

 will finally be overcome by this sea of whiskey

 

Life is hard and whiskey makes it better

 so give me a bottle of that lovely brown nectar

 I don’t need a glass it’s alright I’ll drink straight from the bottle and just sleep here tonight

I’ve worked a thousand hours and dreamed a million dreams but life still found a way to break me

So drown me in a sea of whiskey, and let me be

 I don’t want your sympathy, this world is cold and the people are rotten that’s why

 I turned to this beautiful drink

I just want to be forgotten   

Reviews

[Firemay]

This is really deep, and i'm sorry you feel that way.. hope you give life another chance and see it's not all bad.
In the sentence: "I’ve worked a thousand hours and dreamed a million dreams but life still found a way to brake me" it's supposed to be "break" and not "brake".
Other than that, well done!

[Mike]

Thanks for the comment, i've changed that now i didn't notice thank you

[Mike]

hope you enjoy reading this. please let me know what you think