How long since you have seen me?

If you miss someone, tell them. Right now. Seriously.

Today's heat has been making me tired.
I can't help but sleep, with sheets between my knees.
Lately I've been seeing you a lot.
We were talking on my roof in dreams,
where little things don't make a difference.
You were selling ways to be a friend,
 while I just talked of all the love that I would send.
Its been so long since you have seen me.
but damn,
I've been seeing you a lot.
I think its time to call and say I'm sorry.

Reviews

screw your pride, say it before it's too late, because you never know.

[cest la vie]

Sorry does seem to be the hardest word, doesn't it?

Love this piece.. The angst felt, then decision to just dial.. Nicely done!!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like it...people should really tell others if they miss them...for one day they might wish they had...but you can never go back.
Great Job

[Deborah Shepard]

well done, love the way you presented it

[Suki]

this is really nice, i like it. it really sucks when miss someone but you dont tell them because thry probably think that you dont even care about them when its the exact opposite

[MissRed]

I love this! The line: "You were selling ways to be a friend" is so neatly put. I've not thought of it that way, but isn't that basically what we do? And if we aren't the ones doing it, someone is surely doing it to us. Very beautiful work!

[julian3]

Strange, how those two words can bridge a great distance. This was very well done!

[Brittney]

hey this is really good. i really like it.