Cold as Snow
A Book by corvus
 Aaron Mort was 10 years old when he died. After a life of misery and misfortune in the outlying borders of purgatory, he reflects on the mystical events that led him to his undoing.  © 2012 corvus
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I've been working on this story for three years now, and I'm just coming back to the beginning to edit it.. technically the entire first half has to be re-written and the first few chapters are quite crucial, so any inconsistencies or changes would be appreciated.
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Three years, it definitely sounds like it’s your baby. I’m on the two year mark myself. I’ll check it out.
BTY-You can remove the idiot below. He or she is a thorn in the side of the website right now. They posted the same comment everywhere on the site. Seriously, a true idiot to claim something is dull and unappealing before you have posted the story to read.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you, it is my baby, haha. Would you mind looking at the prologue perhaps? Thank you..
A.. read moreThank you, it is my baby, haha. Would you mind looking at the prologue perhaps? Thank you..
Ah, no it's quite all right. It gave me quite the shock though, and I came down on them pretty hard, but I actually think the way I presented the story may be quite dull and unappealing... so I'm keeping it in mind for future edits =)
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Can' t wait to read it. I hope you flaged his a*s and made it so he can't copy your hard work.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Oh most certainly, but it appears he's a troll and has done this to several other authors. We're wor.. read moreOh most certainly, but it appears he's a troll and has done this to several other authors. We're working to get him banned =)
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11 Years Ago
he's gone now so no one really has to worry anymore. we believe that he opened another account but h.. read morehe's gone now so no one really has to worry anymore. we believe that he opened another account but he hasn't done any spamming about copying work. he's just sprouting s**t about himself and the unjust way we were to goff. don't worry though we have a tab on him^_^
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11 Years Ago
Ah good thank you very much =) He's an arrogant git none the less and I was extremely scared for a .. read moreAh good thank you very much =) He's an arrogant git none the less and I was extremely scared for a moment there..
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Three years, it definitely sounds like it’s your baby. I’m on the two year mark myself. I’ll check it out.
BTY-You can remove the idiot below. He or she is a thorn in the side of the website right now. They posted the same comment everywhere on the site. Seriously, a true idiot to claim something is dull and unappealing before you have posted the story to read.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you, it is my baby, haha. Would you mind looking at the prologue perhaps? Thank you..
A.. read moreThank you, it is my baby, haha. Would you mind looking at the prologue perhaps? Thank you..
Ah, no it's quite all right. It gave me quite the shock though, and I came down on them pretty hard, but I actually think the way I presented the story may be quite dull and unappealing... so I'm keeping it in mind for future edits =)
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Added on August 5, 2012
Last Updated on August 5, 2012
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corvus
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Hello! I'm a young writer very interested in improving herself and her writing... I love a wide range of authors, such as Tolkein and J.K. Rowling, as well as other who aren't as well known, such as A.. more..
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