I'd Swim

I'd Swim

A Poem by CosminDZS
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I’d swim to the furthest point out water

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I’d swim to the
furthest point out water
to silence, stillness.
Where every wave rose like
a grassy hill
and you could see the blue
curving horizon.  

© 2014 CosminDZS


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Lovely imagery! Sometimes the fewest words are the best.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Such a beautiful tranquil read...really enjoyed :) x

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

My work here is done, thank you Tia
I like it! :) It's simplicity makes it pure and flawless.

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

I wouldn't say flawless but I am humbled by your comments
This paints a beautiful picture! Short and sweet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

A little too short for my tastes, but thank you Madalyn
Simple and pointed...


Nice.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

Atleast it's not cryptic, heh
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

LOL...true enough...
S.
There is determination and vision in this great write. Wanting to swim to the furthest...Bravo................

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

Even further than that Sami, much thanks
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. Good to know...You are welcome...:)...................
I like this poem. I suicide the big storms of the Winter from 1992-1994 on the Monterey coastline. I love being alone with the sea and becoming one with her. I tell people. Respect the sea and it won't hurt you. Good visions create by the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


CosminDZS

10 Years Ago

You can truly find peace out in the water Coyote, thank you

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Added on February 2, 2014
Last Updated on February 2, 2014
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CosminDZS
CosminDZS

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