Hail nature!

As poets we all love nature and the elements, go green and preserve

In water's waves
Fire's flames
Air's gusty wind.
Earth's dust
tree leaves
icy chilly feel.

In whis-per-ings
Shiny things
Green grass that sways.
Starring skies
Luna eyes
Even sunny rays.

Nature speaks through all of these,
So lend a listening ear.
And let grow, until there's more
So we may still be here.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

i like it! the simplicity and romantic descriptions in tribute to nature and to poets .. well done says i! the tune "These are a few of my favorite things" sprung to mind as i started reading your closing verse ... i don't know why .. it just did :) ... your call to attend the world we live in is eternal ... well spoken!
E.

[Confuser]

coasta siwale: What a beautiful world we live in, nature speaks to us all and this poem is a fine example of someone that watches, with large eyes and listens with ears of an elephant - we can feel and smell the essense of it's beautiful through poems, like yours. I hope you write more about nature and give us some descriptions of more of the things you see. We must let it grow, and your correct to survive: Love the title and ending. I like stanza two the best, it gives lovely descriptions which gives me rich vivid imagery. Thank you so very much. Dale

[costa siwale]

Thank you for your review, am beyond encouraged Dale.

[Confuser]

You're welcome!

[Chirag Kumar]

This poem is awesome Costa. Short and sweet. Keep writing more :)

[Justin Xavier Smith]

Decent poem. In a way it reads like the most basic descriptions of these things. It doesn't really evoke a feeling from me, or any type of emotion, but it does make me appreciate the beauty of nature. I like the message of the poem, but I'm not sure it comes across really well unless you read the "description" part of the poem, so I think that may be an issue as well. None of this is the say that the poem is bad, but I have faith you can do better :)

[PurpleQuartz]

I love nature poems and this one was definitely no exception. The words you used really created some powerful imagery! It brought about a happy feeling 100/100

[costa siwale]

Thank you so much for your review. I love nature too

[carrotcruncher]

The first verse leaves me feeling chilled and wanting warmth, really vivid it gets the imagination working

[DIVYA]

So much said in so few lines...

And let grow, until there's more
So we may still be here.

A vital message delivered beautifully.

[costa siwale]

Thank you dear. All we have is this earth, would be tragic if we destroyed it,..thank you for the encouraging words

[DIVYA]

You are welcome Costa :)

[KAin]

Hey, nice work, simple, but elegantly done. Something of a call to safeguard nature, and treat it with both honour and respect, after all, without it what do we have? Just a synthesized world, where nothing is real...
A beautiful, well-crafted poem, made palatable with both its brevity and its message.
Keep up the good work, friend.

[costa siwale]

This is an encouraging comment, am so glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much

[Hotwater]

*applause* *applause* *applause* ... a very well written poem indeed!

*bird*

[costa siwale]

Thank you so much for reading, much appreciated

[costa siwale]

Thank you so much for reading, much appreciated

[Death Girl]

Nicely done. I love how you capture all the things about nature and its beautifully written.

[costa siwale]

thanks 'my death'..glad you like it