Hail nature!

Hail nature!

A Poem by costa siwale
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As poets we all love nature and the elements, go green and preserve

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In water's waves
Fire's flames
Air's gusty wind.
Earth's dust
tree leaves
icy chilly feel.

In whis-per-ings
Shiny things
Green grass that sways.
Starring skies
Luna eyes
Even sunny rays.

Nature speaks through all of these,
So lend a listening ear.
And let grow, until there's more
So we may still be here.

© 2013 costa siwale


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You've captured nature beautifully in this wisp of a poem. Your language and enthusiasm are richly received.

Posted 10 Years Ago


costa siwale

10 Years Ago

Thank so much..am glad you like it Ice
ALthough the beauty of nature is conveyed in it's entireity in this lovely poem, the last two lines were the best for me, as they say it all. I just loved reading this great poem. Thanks...

Posted 10 Years Ago


costa siwale

10 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to read Divya..much appreciated
That was awesome:)))) Beauty can be found if we see hear pay attention:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


costa siwale

10 Years Ago

Indeed Jonathan! Thank you for reading
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10 Years Ago

Your welcome ,But now its speaking to me even my own words said, I guess timing is everything.
a beautiful and colorful picture of nature you have drawn, liked it.
best wishes

Posted 10 Years Ago


costa siwale

10 Years Ago

Glad you like it Prritiy. Thanks
Prritiy

10 Years Ago

you are welcome
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TLK
The language used here is poetic, but the use of very common tropes (e.g. the four Classic 'elements') renders it less powerful. Is there some surprising or arresting image that you can use to grab the reader?

Posted 10 Years Ago


costa siwale

10 Years Ago

Thank you TLK, I'll take that in to consideration,

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costa siwale
costa siwale

Lusaka , southern region, Zambia



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Am inspired by you inspirational people, and wish to satiate my ardent curiosity for poetry. add me and let's get writing. more..

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