Even in Death!

Even in Death!

A Poem by costa siwale
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Dying lover's declarations

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i see you! with burning tears,
i lone for you! and your earthly fears.
you stitched your name into my heart!
so that in life as in death,
we never part.


© 2015 costa siwale



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costa siwale
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Ohhhhh!
Such a sweet gesture!
Lovely
:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


costa siwale

1 Month Ago

Much appreciated Pragati, always good to receive feedback. Thanks again
I love this poem, and how all the emotions swirled together. You have a beautiful gift writing like you do. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Eva

Posted 1 Year Ago


costa siwale

1 Year Ago

thank you so much Eva, your comments always refreshing
Oh.. this is heart wrenching and desirous as well...
The image itself tells a sweet yet sad love story.. I am crazy for love stories and this has given me a number of ideas for my story... Thanks a lot for that....
Now coming to this poem, I liked those few lines which hide a long love story behind them... The 'stitched your name on my heart' part was very sweet...
Your writings are too good!!!
Ani : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


costa siwale

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words Anindita, i am glad you took a minute in your time to read thi.. read more
Anindita Janhabee

1 Year Ago

was a pleasure reading...
Goodness... I am not sure if it is your beautiful words or the picture that had brought tears to my eyes, or perhaps an overwhelming mixture of them both... But this just tugs at the heart. Such a small amount of words perfectly delivered, Costa. Forgive me for sobbing like a baby... As these are sentiments a lover would always wish to take with them, would never wish to be parted from. So romantic and endearing. Utterly enjoyed this poem and all the emotions which swelled while reading. Thank you so much for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


costa siwale

1 Year Ago

this is the best review i ever got, its words like yours that encourage someone to keep at it. thank.. read more
A lovely piece of poetry with deep emotions
expressed ..well crafted..

Posted 2 Years Ago


costa siwale

2 Years Ago

thank you Fran Marie, much appreciated
Beautiful poem. Very heartfelt and sweet. Nice work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


costa siwale

2 Years Ago

thank you very much and thank you for taking the time
Oh that's great friend.
Love means forever, specially according to the modern life and style.
Great one Dude.

Posted 2 Years Ago


costa siwale

2 Years Ago

thanks Saddam, always good to hear from you.
Saddam

2 Years Ago

most welcome friend, thanks.
wow amazing piece very sweet and the picture just makes it all so more real....love this piece :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


costa siwale

2 Years Ago

thank you for reviewing Micky
micky

2 Years Ago

Your welcome :)

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costa siwale
costa siwale

Lusaka , southern region, Zambia



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