String!

String!

A Poem by costa siwale
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maybe our fate is controlled by greater beings/things, elusive unseen. maybe

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Fixed! to my heart mind and soul,
puppeteer-ed by a living shadow,
Strings! 
From above and down below. 

mechanized bone and flesh,
like mannequins undressed,
exposed! 
through to the soul,
like candles in a storm. 

strings! are strung,  
by gods, by shadows. 





© 2016 costa siwale



Author's Note

costa siwale
i don't fully know where this was going. But please live a comment, thank you

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Well, I think it went very well! You really do have a good use of words.

Posted 7 Months Ago


costa siwale

7 Months Ago

THANK YOU VERY MUCH. Your words are encouraged
free will is given to everyone but sometimeswe fall in love serendering our will to a power greater
than ourselves

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

costa siwale

9 Months Ago

thank you for commenting, am glad you took the time to read. thank you again
If this is a work-in-progress I look forward to seeing more. Being "puppeteer-ed by a living shadow" is a beautiful line.

Posted 11 Months Ago


costa siwale

11 Months Ago

i will try to added more.. but thank you for reading Stanley..much appreciated it.
Respect Costa Siwale

I find this piece cleverly crafted and creative. Execution is masterful.

Posted 11 Months Ago


costa siwale

11 Months Ago

Thank you for reading Satoshi, much appreciated

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costa siwale
costa siwale

Lusaka , southern region, Zambia



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Am inspired by you inspirational people, and wish to satiate my ardent curiosity for poetry. add me and let's get writing. more..

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Andrew Nelson Stewart Andrew Nelson Stewart
In poetry and to find answers of who we are while walking the ephemeral road upon cracks of pain signs leading you.
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