Words knot Worlds

Chapter one had to have a chapter two, and three.

Mean spirited  perfume
Singed eyes and the steeds splendid stature
Their presence hidden by
The knight of Oblivion
Purer then glass
Yet,
He provided a mystical camouflage
a sky serene
Yes death
Tip toed for the two,
Unseen merciful madness

Clouded eyes fought perfume
Majestic splendid the horse bunched
bowing to a sublime presence
Oblivion exposed
a purer realm awaited him
the glass cut
mortal and horse fell from the sky serene
madness or death
 two prayed for merciful gods.

Pungent perfume  prayer
Stately splendid presence a horse
and rider escaping  the knight of Oblivion
Purer thoughts  exist
Gods raised their glass
toasting their sky serene
Uncloaking the veil of death
two  realms balanced
one merciful, one bedlam coiled death
L V C

Author's Note

The conclusion to Tolvin.

Reviews

[Sheila Kline]

Wonderful!!..............I like the second version the best (did you mean vail, or veil?...could be either?) So very different than what I came up for the contest. I would certainly enter all 3 versions!

[lee von cleef]

Don't know the rules can you enter more then one ?