Welcome Home Muse

Welcome Home Muse

A Poem by lee von cleef

Stepped into the woods....
Waited...
I could feel the weight of the thing....
A wave static prickly skin side up cool shiver ....

Then a warm hollow filled the canyon....
and bright shut my eyes tight......
Crack !
Booming from rim to rim....

Silence again but for one lowly crinkled juniper ..

The mark of God in Lucifer's world,

Welcome Home Muse.......




© 2013 lee von cleef



Author's Note

lee von cleef
Dear Lucifer
A Poem by Muse

So good to have the words of Muse back in the Cafe....

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I've missed her lightning too! She is pure electricity in the Café... One of the best writers here...
I'm so glad she's back...she raises the bar when it comes to poetry, we can all learn from her!
This is a fabulous welcoming tribute to our dear MUSE! I know she's been my muse, many a time. ~xoxo~

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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a fitting ode..to a fine poetess

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wonderful tribute poem...nicely imaged.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. This was so nice and a great tribute...Both you and her are splendid poets...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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lee von cleef

4 Years Ago

Splendid, yes She is Splendid ! Me with a little help from my friends I am still at it.
Sami Khalil

4 Years Ago

Good to know...You are welcome...:)
I've missed her lightning too! She is pure electricity in the Café... One of the best writers here...
I'm so glad she's back...she raises the bar when it comes to poetry, we can all learn from her!
This is a fabulous welcoming tribute to our dear MUSE! I know she's been my muse, many a time. ~xoxo~

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful poem and tribute to a beautiful woman inside and out. I like the pic too.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

4 Years Ago

Courtney did steal their hearts.
I agree with the sentiment!
Also, I enjoyed the poetry here.
I could almost see her in this picture as well.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautifully written ode. I love the words and the imagery, and you obviously have strong feelings about the concept, which is quite delightful. I love the sublime nature of this one, and all of the "earth" imagery used. I'm wondering about the use of all the elipses, they tend to break up the flow a little for me, but that is probably because I read so literally--when I see an elipses, I can't help but take a long pause before the next line. Otherwise, very well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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lee von cleef

4 Years Ago

on second look they do slow it way down, maybe too much yes.
You have coaxed me into a dream state, with such wonderful descriptions, the arousing feelings, the large rural setting, the gleaming, cryptic mood, all finely polished, great, accomplished writing here Lee!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a gorgeous poem & tribute to a very lovely poet, your sentiment here is echoed by me and so many others I'm sure, yes, welcome back Muse!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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:: beautifully said... thank you so much for expressing so magically the sentiments in the hearts of so many... i'm really happy she's back too...

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