Space

Everything.

There was nothing

no color, 

no light,

no sound,

nothing

There was nothing

and none were there to witness it

then, in an instant

an atom appeared

and life flooded into the nothingness

over time, the life became stronger

it turned the eternal darkness into an oasis of life

Over billions and billions of years, 

a universe vibrant with stars and planets and galaxies formed

the life became so great

that more universes formed

now here we are,

but in the end all will end

just as it had started

 

 

Reviews

[The Wave]

I like this, I really do. But I feel it needed more emotion, more life in your words.

anyway, you seem to be a good enough writer because I must have read that poem a billion times before writing this review. good job :)

[Emmie Girl]

I like this...it's adding a poetic twist to what we accept as the theory of how life started...the last two lines are my favorite...it's saying exactly what you want, but without the wordy-ness...nice write...!

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