He Was

A Poem by Invisible Ink

tiny stories

Alfred was

that kind

of boy

© 2011 Invisible Ink

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PaperHearts

It was initially the title that drew me to open this poem, and after reading it, I find it so amazing how you're able to create such a sense of mystery and intrigue in such a short and simplistic form.
I loved it!
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jason Henry

unbelievably cool...the mystery in this is crippling!

Posted 15 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Angel's Lady

Great job! (I get the feeling he was naughty. Does his mother know?)

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hope

I feel that way, i have an ex-bf and he was not who i thought he was and am have been feeling uplifted lately because i feel like i don't have a burden lingering above me any more, and i feel free!! At the same time tho' i only hope and pray for the best for him to come back to his senses....anyway.... thank You soooo much for your poem!!! It was and is amazing, despite the length, everyone knows that there is a story behind it

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on May 31, 2008
Last Updated on January 4, 2011

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Invisible Ink

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"I guess I wrote in invisible ink, Oh, I've tried to think how I could have made it appear"- Aimee Mann Open the cage and set the bird free. I am a writer. A poet. Words have saved me. I am a .. more..